Fiction: Polish

Posted by on Feb 18, 2013 in Fiction | 12 comments

The bottle was nearly empty, but Celina tipped it and turned it and managed to get enough nail polish for her last fingernail.  She slid the brush over her thumbnail, spreading the angry red lacquer to the tip of her nail.  She capped the bottle and tossed it in the waste basket, where it clanged and startled Isis as she applied her false eyelashes.

“Girl!  Why you go and scare me like that?  Now I got eyelash glue on my sparkles!”  Isis, dabbed the glue off her eyelid with a cotton swab.

“Mmm… Sorry, bitch.  Wasn’t thinkin’.”

“Of course you not, girl.  Bad bidness with Joey, huh?”

Celina sighed.  She didn’t want to talk about her brother, especially not with Isis, whose crassness ran up and down every vertebrae of Celina’s back.

“Oh, I’m saw-ry.  I forgot you don’ like ta talk about your family at work, ” Isis rolled her eyes and re-applied her eyelashes.  “He don’ know what he missin’ by not watching your show, lord love a duck.”

“Whatever,” Celina muttered.  She waved her hand back and forth, fanning her warm face and drying her nail polish.

“Besides, you din’ hafta tell him nothin’ about what you do on you own time, girl,” Isis commented as she selected lipstick, a shade of deep maroon which matched her huge platform stilettos.  “I think I use this one ta-night.  It feels right.”  She held the tube out to Celina, who nodded absently and began to slide a pair of thigh-high stockings up her smooth leg.

Isis was right, Celina didn’t have to tell her brother what she did in her time off, but she had.  She supposed it was because last weekend she had recognized a childhood classmate in the audience, a heckler who hadn’t hesitated to call her out as she was coyly singing “Happy Birthday” to another patron, a la Marilyn Monroe.  She figured that once the old classmate started talking, everyone would know that she did the runway shows every weekend.  She couldn’t bear the thought of Joey learning from someone else that, in her off time, Chad danced as Celina on the drag show circuit.

Until last weekend, Chad and Celina had existed completely separately from each other.  Chad went to work Monday through Friday at the family landscaping business and Celina made appearances each weekend on stage, never the two to meet.  But the unknown response of the heckling classmate made Celina realize that she needed to come out to her family before she was forced out.  So she had invited her mother and brother over for brunch and to explain her double life.

Celina set the table for a party; she had asked her mother and Joey to let themselves in and to help themselves to a mimosa while she finished getting dressed.  She had planned her entrance perfectly: she would enter the room wearing a new dress and shoes and carrying a tray of fruit and scones.

She had taken a deep breath in an attempt to calm her racing heart and had glided into the room looking very much like June Cleaver.

Celina’s mother took the news well; she looked like she was relieved.  “I thought you were into drugs or something awful — you would disappear every weekend and I was just so scared that you were sick or in over your head or something,” she had run-on, squeezing Celina tightly.

Joey, on the other hand, was tight-lipped.  His clenched jaw illustrated his disgust.  When he finally spoke, he spat out, “I heard the rumors, but I didn’t know they was true.  How can you do this to me?  I’m going to lose my business if people find out!”

Then Joey stormed out, slamming the door to Celina’s trailer,  his anger sucking all of the life from the room.

Celina slumped in her chair.  “I guess he’d rather I do drugs,” she said bitterly.

Her mother slid her chair closer and took both of Celina’s hands into her own.

“Honey, he’s gonna need some time.  He’s always looked up to you and this has thrown him for a loop.  He’s more like your father than you realize.”

Celina nodded, a tear wobbled on her chin before falling onto her cheery floral dress.

“Mom, there’s tickets for you and Joey to tonight’s show at the will-call booth, if you’d like to see me.”

“Of course!  I’d love to watch your show!” her mother had effused.

Those words of support bolstered Celina as she took the stage for the first time with family in the audience.  She strutted around the stage confidently, scanning the audience.  She quickly found her mother and blew her a kiss as she started her performance.

She pretended not to notice the empty seat where Joey should have been sitting.

 

Hello there! I’m linking up this piece o’ fiction with the loverly people at The Speakeasy at Yeah Write. If you’re in the mood to see what other people did with the empty bottle prompt, check it out! Come back on Thursday to vote for your favorites (which could be mine — just sayin’).

12 Comments

  1. I guess moms are more accepting of this type of news than brothers are.
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  2. Nice that the mother took this in her stride. Some nice characterisation in this piece. Well done.
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  3. While not fully a positive ending, it holds more acceptance than many receive. Great piece! Would love to read more!
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  4. Wonderfully creative take on the prompt! I love the way it unfolded gradually, taking us bit by bit into Celina’s world. Great story! Sad, but great. :)
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  5. This is lovely! Reminds me of the piece Bee wrote a couple of weeks ago. Stories like this always warm my heart – people should feel free to be who they are and more family members should be accepting like Celina’s mother. Great job!
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  6. Ah well done Courtenay! Love the Mom but those brothers. Also, you did a great job with the dialog here.
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  7. I like how you handled dilague and dialect. I love that stuff. The characters are the opposite of cliche. I enjoyed this.
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  8. I really enjoyed this. You wrote the characters so well. Everyone felt so real. I’d like to think Joey just needs some time and that maybe in a few weeks he’ll attend one of Celina’s shows!
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  9. Nail polish came to my mind, too! I also liked how you drew the characters in this one. I hope I will be as accepting of my children as they grow up as this mom was.
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  10. Well done! You really drew me in with your story.
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  11. Terrific job with the dialogue. Triumphant, yet sad. The last line really got me.
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  12. You covered a lot of territory in this piece. Nice flow.

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